I have 3 screenplays I'm looking for feedback and critiques on: 2 are TV pilots & one full movie screenplay:
1)Good people: TV pilot - Drama 68 pgs: A man returns to his hometown over a decade after being the suspected mastermind behind a large retail crime ring a changed man. But Local cops, a large private Detective firm and some other still have a grudge and unfinished business with him.
drive.google.com/open?id=0B7DW…
www.dropbox.com/s/kc2ivcohhpkw…2)Virus: TV pilot - Sci-fi/action/comedy 56pgs: It's 3000 A.D: The Universe has been commercialized and Colonized, there's no religions and Aliens have revealed themselves to humanity. A drug addicted hitman wakes up with virtually no memory and list of people he has taken on contracts to kill.
www.dropbox.com/s/d8cn1qtpsbrp…drive.google.com/open?id=0B7DW…3)Under The World: Sci-fi/thriller - full screenplay 108pgs: A Guy experiences the same day(election day) over and over again and is not sure if he's dreaming. His friend believes they have been kidnapped by Aliens or Russians.
drive.google.com/open?id=0B7DW…www.dropbox.com/s/5ojxxdr9nnpw…