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i have edited my story like 5 times and im trying to submit it to equestria daily, but they keep seeing mistakes that i do not see.

It is only 4 pages/chapters long and i have corrected so many things and i just do not know what else to correct.  can  someone help me edit this?

fav.me/d5n6kq7

as soon as possible :)
:iconmelalina:
Melalina Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Still need help? Check me out: [link]
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Nate-Walis Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm game to have a look for you.
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